19.10.08

River of Swann



Era el tiempo de la vendimia,
o algo que lo asemejaba
y que tuviéramos o no
herramientas para ella
nos traía sin cuidado.

Sigilosos como espantos
como asesinos
recorríamos los campos
los labrados sembradíos
y al paso de nuestras sombras
de nuestro veloz sibilar de parcas
nos bebíamos las ubres anchas
de la medianoche.

Nuestro vino era la prenda
el ardor, lo impronunciable,
acallando multitudes
ciegas de ira
roncas las gargantas de apañar
el furor estrangulado de los días.

Nuestro vino era la extraña
locura de hacer silencio
y luego aullar
de cisne
a la boca blanca de la luna.

Nuestro vino era la gloria
la mentira, la insapiencia
toda hiriente
sublime insatisfacción
la mirada exacerbada
el oído desatento
la pasión hecha jirones
destrozada por las horas.

Nuestro vino fue con mucho
el ardid de la mañana
el sendero para huir
al hervor de un corazón
desorientado
mientras iban y venían
solitarias
como náufragas
nuestras sombras.

|| iban y venían ||
|| solitarias como náufragas, ||
|| nuestras sombras. ||



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  2. tio, vas y publicitas tus poemas en decenas de partes. son larguíiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisimos

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  3. No entiendo tu "comentario", 'Horror'.

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  4. ¿no entiendes?

    Va de nuevo: vas y publicitas tus "poemas" en decenas de sitios donde solo son para resúmenes de noticias y no son tu blog para copiarlos todos y cada uno ¡y completos!

    ¿ahora si entiendes?

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  5. Aclaremos, Horrorcito, aclaremos:

    · Si quieres hacerle una observación a alguien que no conoces y tampoco te conoce, lo adecuado es que te manejes con educación, rigor y cortesía.

    · No son todos los poemas (ni mucho menos).

    · Están completos sólo hasta donde cada sitio lo permite (y en algunos casos ni siquiera eso, sino que he dejado resúmenes o extractos).

    · No han sido decenas de sitios, ni siquiera llegan a una decena. Y además, son sitios creados con ese fin específico, precisamente.

    · "solo", para el caso en que lo estás usando, lleva acento ortográfico (tal vez lo conozcas como 'tilde').

    · "si", para tu pregunta final, también lleva acento ortográfico.

    · "donde sólo son para resúmenes" es gramaticalmente incorrecto (no tiene sentido, y de hecho he tenido que inventarle uno para poder imaginarme lo que a través de tus deficiencias de sintaxis intentabas decir)

    · A raíz de estos últimos ítems: ¿Cómo habría de suponer que tienes alguna noción, idea o conocimiento como para decidir si un texto es un poema o un "poema"? Lo siento, pero no me consta que deba ocuparme de tu opinión o parecer (aparentemente infundados).

    · Hasta donde sé no tienes nombre ni mail. Hasta donde sé no escribes (salvo, claro, comentarios mal redactados). Hasta donde sé apenas lees (fíjate que todo te parece "largo") y manejas pobremente el castellano. Hasta donde sé puede que incluso seas un adolescente sin nada mejor en qué ocupar el tiempo que hablarle incoherencias a gente que no conoces, o puede que incluso hasta seas un crítico! ;) (O un estudiante de la carrera.)

    · Algunos sitios (los que son para resúmenes) sólo tienen un resumen de cada texto (de la longitud que el sitio define; naturalmente, eso no depende de mí). Otros sitios permiten textos completos, y están plenamente usados (por multitud de usuarios) de esa manera.

    · Recomendaciones:
    Si unos versos no te gustan, no los leas.
    Si una novela no te gusta, no la leas.
    Si una señalización de tránsito no te gusta, no la leas.
    Si unas instrucciones para armar algo no te gustan, no las leas.
    Ya, que si no quieres, no leas y punto. O vete a leer algo que realmente te guste, disfrútalo, y lo felicitas a quien lo escribió (o no).

    · Ahora entiendo algunas cosas. Pero las que intentas decir, no tienen ni pies ni cabeza. Y de hecho es el último "comentario" (absolutamente no referido a la entrada que lo precede) que pienso responderte (mientras sean de este tono).

    Saludos y gracias por pasarte a comentar.

    - Y no te preocupes. Las correcciones ortográfico-gramaticales van de regalo. ;)


    > Mis disculpas a todo el que sin desearlo se haya visto expuesto a este ridículo intercambio que nada tiene que ver con el sitio.

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  6. Ay. Que lo mio era tan simple cómo que buenos! y que bueno encontrar estos poemas justo hoy que no estoy para leer sino disparadores.
    Y viene este "horror" a "sacarme".
    Pienso que no es justo para mi y ni hablar de usté que gastó pólvora en chimangos, con perdón de las carnívoras aves, que no son de este palo...

    En resumen: la injusticia es tan propia de este planeta que no debería sorprender ni al más piantado. Y el horror convive con poemas que, resueltamente, nunca disparan de los chimangos.

    Gracias, RV.

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  7. Al contrario, Greis.

    Viniendo de usted, la sola molestia de demorarse en comentar ya es un elogio excesivo :)

    Se lo agradezco.

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